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    有的标点不太对,写的不错O,采纳吧。谢谢

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    November 10th sunday snowy
    Today was sunday. In the morning,(这里逗号)
    I ate breakfast and (如果是改错别字就不用加and了)
    I did(have done也可以) my homework .
    In the afternoon,(这里也是)
    I had a math class. I got home(会不会令误会呢 got back to 或是 came行吗?)
    at half past four(这里错了 你想指几多点...是14:30吗?这样就half past two)
    Then I played with my friend(要加s吗?)
    and played computer (games?) at six o'clock/6pm
    In the evening I ate dinner with my family.(这里的句号到那里了00?)
    Then, I went for (a) walk.
    (I had to do homework but I thought it was very boring.)

    第二篇
    If I had a million (没有of)dollars
    If I had a million(一样) dollars.
    I would do many things.
    Firstly,(逗号啦) I would deposit (我们不用put的,但可以用save) some money in the bank(错字).
    I would buy a big house for my family (by using the rest of money)
    Secondly行吗?, I would travel around the world.
    Thirdly行吗?,
    I would buy a lot of boks (because) I like reading (and) I think reading is important.
    Finally,(逗号00)I would (donate)我们不用GIVE的 some money to charity.
    如果你想可以加It is because I want to help other people.
    (What would you do if you had a million dollars?)这个通顺一点
    ****原句: How about you if you had a million dollars?******
    好啦,提醒一句其实上网也有很多类似的作文 用英文搜寻就行了

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    October 1st, 2006 Sunday Cloudy
    Today was Sunday, and I don't have class today.
    I went to the People Park with my mother in the morning , and we had a good time.
    In the afternoon we bought some food and I help my mother with cooking.
    After the supper, I watched TV for half an hour. I began to do homework at 7:30PM , and finished it at 9:30PM.
    I had a busy day. I will meet my foreign friends tomorrow.

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    第一篇,Today was sunday was—is,今天不是过去式。全文基调最好用一般现在式。
    Today is sunday . In the morning,I eat breakfast in the morning,then do my homework . In the afternoon . I have a math class . I get home at two thirty in the afternoon . Then I play computer games with my friend at 6pm . In the evening, I eat dinner with my family ,then I go for a walk and do my homework . I think .today is very boring。后面的文字,那个人基本都回答了,没时间看了

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    Everyone has their own dreams, I am the same. But my dream is not a lawyer, not a doctor, not actors, not even an industry. Perhaps my dream big people will find it ridiculous, but this has been my pursuit! My dream is to want ...

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    Dear Li Dong, Hello.This is Li Ming.I am going to dine out at a restaurant at No 12,the People Road at 7:00pm,November 1st,and I would like to invite you and your wife to join me.Will you be free t

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    October 1st, 2006 Sunday Cloudy Today was Sunday, and I don't have class today. I went to the People Park with my mother in the morning , and we had a good time. In the afternoon we bought some food and I help my mother with co...

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    这里有20偏,楼主你可以自己选择!!! (一 )用过去时态描写学习 Last weekend Tony was busy but happy. He did a lot of housework... He cleaned the room and washed the clothes. Because his mother had to work last Saturday. He did mo...

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    Oct 1st 2006 sunday cloudy There was no class today, in the morining ,Mom and I went to People's Park,we enjoyed ourselves there,In the afternoon, we bought some food and I helped Mom cook dinner,after dinner, I watched TV half...

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    Today is Sunday. The weather is cloudy with shower. The temperature is 15 to 22 degrees C. The humidity is 90%

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    November 10th sunday snowy Today was sunday. In the morning,(这里逗号) I ate breakfast and (如果是改错别字就不用加and了) I did(have done也可以) my homework . In the afternoon,(这里也是) I had a math class. I got home(会不会令误...

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